I really wish i wasn't as rich as I am now. I mean, money is good and all, but sometimes it just gets old and I get bored. I don't know how I get bored from all the stuff I have. I guess nothing last forever. Even happiness.
I really miss my Grandmother. She passed away two years ago and me and her were tight. We used to cook together and talk about stuff that I didn't talk to my parents about. I miss her.
I really love baseball. I could not live without it. Baseball, to me, is the hardest sport to ever be played. To play, you have to know pretty much everyones; job on the field. Plus, you can have different situations every single time the ball is put in play. It doesn't take a genius, but you can't be stupid because you have to know ALOT.
When I think about how much I love my family, I don't think I love them enough. When I am staying with my parents, since both of my sisters are grown up, they annoy me. As soon as I leave though, and go stay with my grandparents, I start to like them more and I realize how lucky I am.
yeah, I drive a Bugatti, so what? I am not the only one. I hate when people call me a rich slob. I am very humble and they do not know how much I would love to be in their shoes.
Wayne, great post, I like how you went from thought to thought like what happens when you try to sleep. Maybe you could change that semicolon to an apostrophe.
ReplyDeleteI like how you explained different parts of his life. To me it seems like he is a rich kid who loves baseball, but doesn't love baseball as much as his grandmother. I am excited for this short story, maybe you could put some twists in his life to make the story a little more interesting.
ReplyDeleteNot too shabby Wayner! I really like your post for this week! You explained the different lives from baseball to his money and etc. I also like how you explained all of these thoughts as if he was about to go to bed! Keep up the good work bro!
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